Demonic Transcendence

Beautiful written....love it

Overall good potential with poor presentation. The story would be much better with solid editing. The translation (presumably) needs work. A lot of the English feels clunky and flows poorly but it is still reasonably easy to read. Good idea and spin on kingdom building, despite the typical story arc. Some fresh mechanics. The characters have potential to grow.

It is a really good book, but it is slow af. I understand that character development and world building is important, but man i read 60+ chapters and he didn't have anything. The most he did was produce beer and spice without the facilities to produce them might I add. The next thing is why is he running from 100 dudes, I get the plan and it would be more reasonable if he reincarnated as a total nobody not as a noble who he had two cities under control and enough time to ride to the governor and have a feast and tournament with. Yeah he only had 50 dudes, but in the city he was at, with full control over it, lived 2000+ people with a city guard.Even though I complained so much, I have huge respect for you and your works, development is just slow af in this one

i quite like this story. i like that the mc is actually smart and not the fake smart some are. i like that the mc is somewhat weak to strong, and took a interesting way to abuse his knowledge of the future.

i really liked the plot and read 89 chapters in 2 days, sadly this has been dropped! wish the author will have a change of mind or just one day going to surprise all of us with a mass release 😞💀

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[This review adheres to the five different rating categories Webnovel provides. In order, Writing quality, stability of updates, story development, character design, and world background. I will separate these into different paragraphs for your convenience.]I rate the writing quality four stars. There isn't an egregious amount of spelling mistakes throughout the currently released chapters, and the flow of reading is pretty good with the exception of the first chapter. Hopefully, you can call me a doofus for saying that once my fellow author polishes it to represent his peak performance.Stability of updates is five stars. With an initial five chapters to start everyone off, I'm sure we can expect more at a steady pace going forward.Story Development is five stars. The foundation of the story was laid out both in the synopsis and the initial chapters. We can clearly see the suffering the protagonist must endure, making me want to root for him and hope that he'll come out of this terrible ordeal.Character design is three stars. No one in the story has a memorable appearance thus far in my mind, though they are quite animated despite that. They aren't cardboard cutouts wearing clothes, which is good, but they could certainly use some more descriptors.World Background is five stars. While laying down the foundation of the story, we learn a great deal of the world's history. It's a point of interest in the synopsis, and a cause of conflict in the story.The overall rating I give this novel is 4.4 stars. It's pretty good!

OMOOOO I LIKE THE STORY ITSELFFF! This sci-fi story is surely one of the best I have ever read so far. It shows the creative mind and imagination of the Author!!! Kudos to the Author.