Mc is bland with no motives and says he wants to get stronger yet barely does anything to do that. The mc is an idiot without so much as an ounce of drive to get stronger and is so focused on staying low-key he acts just like the stage he pretends to be and I don't think I'll ever see this as someone likeable
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Quiet an Action packed story this is.Review Proper,Writing Quality: There are some g-errors but nothing much to cause not to enjoy reading the story.Story Development: The prologue start on the bond between Gao and Aichi then someone mysteriously abduct him while they are playing? If I'm correct. This already set the mood of the story. Then the Dojo grad, training and fighting leagues, many developments that would not bored the readers easily. The skills too are precisely described.Character Design: There are two characters that the author gave detailed bg story, Gao and Yue. This could make the readers focus more on how there life will grow and develop in the martial arts world. As for the other characters, there intro were not bad and maybe we could also learn more about them in the future chaps.Updating Stability: I see from the notes, that the author follows an update schedule which is good so readers could know when will the story be updated.World Background: Written Well. I see no problems here.Overall, this work is already a great read for me. I would keep this in my collections and see how the the mc's will strive in the martial arts world. Great Work Author!
The translation quality is superb. No mismatched pronouns or names (not that I know of), which is occurring in some of the new and picked up novels. Many of the characters introduced in the story are unique and each having their own personalities. The interactions between the characters during the development of the story is very interesting and amusing to see, especially the reasonable misunderstandings that occur due to the main characters behavior. Although we don't see too much of the world background, it is only 30 chapters long after all. I strongly recommend people to read this novel.
This story is very interesting right from the bat. I found the premise to be good (since I have a thing for butterflies I guess it also helped that the MC's transmigration is somehow connected to this strange purple butterfly). So far the story progresses well and the characters' interactions are nice and easy to follow. Can't wait to read more! 😄
Shameless Author here reviewing his own book. This is my first time doing a mix of post-apocalyptic, cultivation, and comedy genre. If we reach 1k power stones, I will mass release five chapters! If we reach 500k views, another five chapters mass release! That’s my goal so please help me out! This is my WPC#148 entry. I hope I win something or this would be discontinued (ಥ﹏ಥ)Let's make it to the top everyone! And as always, thank you for all the support! Sincerely, DaisukiDayoSenpai
i absolutly love this book, i have read many books but this is definitely one of my most favourite ones, but the updating dates are so long (ik not long but like I WANT TO READ MORE!) :)
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