This looks like another incredible work, I know how much hardwork you put in this.I will be enjoying this novel for the time being...Anyways, goodluck author! I'll support you!
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I honestly have a heart for this kind of stories. The first chapter was already intense, the second hits the emotion, and the story's progress is amazing. A story full of action, yes! Character depth, yes! There's a few punctuation errors, but overall, it has the potential! :)
Hmm, I read the raws, the story is so good at the beginning, but as the story progress through about 100+ chaps, I feel like the story and the focus of the novel swayed a bit or so...... Also it looks like the MC become a little or quite weak compared to the strenght he shows in the starter parts of the story. But overall, I dropped it midway, but hey the start is quite good, unfortunately it seems it is losing its potential bit by bit.
I really like this story, this is great. there maybe some error, but that's normal, just make sure to reread and fix it in the future. Overall, I like it and will continue read it
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