This story is really good the relation between host and system is quite interesting ...slow pace at start but after exam it becomes fast enough ...it lacks badass moments for MC as its also focuses on side character which is good but u should try to make the MC more badass and dominating ...disciples should be more respectful towards sect leader even if their character is cunning towards other disciple but they should be utmost respectful towards MC and try to make some scenes where we can see city people's talking about his deeds and all
The story was good I like how u made the mc be hate by a lot of people have the the phone you can get in your life and that not to get you back you can get a call back and let go of your phone or call you bae I know I don’t have the answer when I’m going back to call me and call you bae I want something good I don’t
The last cage contained a seemingly 16 to 18 year old girl with golden hair and surprisingly little scars on her face and body besidead one running up her left cheek and a few scars on her torso and limbs with the most noticabke one being one that runs from her right hip to just above her naval region in the midst of her six pac speaking of her body it itself is impressive with welldefined musceles proving her past as a fighter yet even with the body of hers once Rei looked into her eyes he confirmed she was just like the rest of the humans in this place better dead than alive
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