Not going to lie, it's the MC that kills this one for me. I have seen case studies on children raised by wolves and this boy is worse than that. He was raised by years by a man who taught him basic skills, but that also means he was socialized to an extent. Since the story started the MC has been in society at least virtually for 3 years, yet he is still acting like a total savage? nah, unless he actually has a mental illness or a developmental disability there is no way this dude is this clueless to human interaction. I am sure it was intended to be humorous and/or edgy, but it absolutely detracts from the story.
loved it. The imagery, the character development, the world building and most importantly capitative storyline is amazing. this one hooked me up. Keep updating bruh...
It is hard for me to read this, not that it is bad, I just don't understand why this was written. No suspense and no action, the characters are stereotypes and feel flat and most of all the MC has no personality at all.This would have been so much better if the MC hadn't transmigrated and didn't have a cheat. I would have loved to follow the exploration of a Cultivation world, but the system denies the reader the opportunity to truely immerse and learn something new.
The first chapter is an excellent hook. I could see why the people would say the MC is annoying, but he seems like a realistic college student. I'm going to keep up with this story.
I genuinely think that your novel is interesting. Although personally I found it too heavy, but it was also light at the same time.I found some words are philosophical so it's really meaningful. The story development is also pace very well. Thanks for introducing this novel to me!
I didn't expect this when I decided to read this novel but I loved it. The characters are well described and we can clearly see their emotions through their actions. At least I can.I look forward to it author!
"Why... are... we... even.... running...?" Isse asked between breaths. Even though Sword-mages were middle range warriors, they often clashed in close range, like Swordsmen. He shouldn't be out of breath with just this.
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