I found many problems for this story 1) the title is totally wrong for the story 2) at the beginning the protagonist had the stats str agi etc .. so it is assumed that by increasing the agility you are not slow later around 300 cap the protagonist has trouble moving because he says he is slightly faster than a normal person 3) always around cap 300 he is in the sea and like an idiot to jump the current he uses shockwave and destroys the boat but I say but you don't have the skill of flight??? 4) towards chapters 200 the story has gone from good to worse mc seems to have become stupid continues to do nothing except to offend people without having available strength, we begin that the girl eve tells him about the family and reveals his name only to bring useless trouble just because the cousin found mc 5) when he was going berserk mc he almost killed one of a realm higher than the so-called cousin then when he calmed down after a few chapters that goes to fight against the cousin does so many di those attacks that he almost loses 6) the stats of the mc seem to be worth something at the beginning then they seem useless with the passage of time 7) as soon as the story begins he does it with stella the teacher of the sect at least I think like a normal person after doing it at least you will talk a little or something but no it says that eva is waiting for her and okay then star seems to disappear as if nothing happened between them 8) when she goes to the Forbidden Forest for the 2nd time she meets pengu that after a fight of life or death he remains almost dry but manages to absorb the excess energy and becomes very strong almost as much as he but after he says sorry and gives him his weapon because he is sorry 9) the fourth time in the forest forbidden manages to kill an action of a sect and after a few days several disciples arrive from different sects.Here I would like to point out that it took him a while to get to the city arena so the distance in this novel becomes worrying, various disciples arrive and after having seen that pengu was injured he goes crazy and kills an old woman with the pea by putting it in her after he beats the various disciples and rapes some girls already here one thinks that maybe the story will be that he is a bit evil and goes to various girls from various clans and he manages to conquer them but no after raping several girls he takes one to make her the future sect master of the sect so the teacher can "graduate" and go to a higher sect riore, 10) in the later chapters he destroys a city and keeps saying to himself I'm not a monster when you first chapters he raped 2 people and he gets so emotional that I almost stopped reading the story there are other flaws in the story but there are some throats by chance, towards the first chapters the story was good then it got worse and worse honestly I don't recommend it just reading this story it seems to me that mc is just a person with a system that the only thing that has not been understood is if it is needed to to get stronger or not, now I keep reading the story just to see if it gets better but it seems like it is getting worse and worseSorry for my english
Nice change of pace from all the other MMORPG novels out there so far. It starts out similarly where the MC is the top player in the game but instead of a betrayal by his best friend and girlfriend. His two best friends notice that he's actually stuck in a rut and has been holding himself back from truly enjoying the game and force him to take a well deserved break. I'm only on Ch 22 but I enjoyed the beginning so far. Very stat oriented once he changes classes but it still progresses instead of just straight numbers. Let's see how it goes.
A brilliant novel, the writing is top quality, the story is great, its a slow paced novel but theres enough going on each chapter that the story keeps you engaged and wanting to read the next chapter. The character are all realistic and have their own strengths and weaknesses. Its a great read if your looking for a cultivation novel with an mc thats willing to do anything to gain power.
Fun story with likable characters. I'm already afraid of outsiders meddling messing up the balance between the MC and the AI. I can see that ending in terrible disaster. Hurry and get James a body asap Kaz! I just found it and read all available chapters at once so I don't know what the update schedule is like.
this is good! giving the zombie vibes in description and is well written just need proofreading for better quality because it will shape the baby into a big one!
I am so in love with these characters. Rowan is soooooo likeable. I love how he is a mix of unsure and fiesty. It is so adorable when he and Wren get together. Talk about chemistry. Great job author making a believable romance that has both sexiness and substance. I will confess…I LOVE Lysander. I know he’s a secondary character, but I sweat everytime he is in a chapter. PLEASE give me more Lysander. I’d even read a whole story featuring him and Nicasi. Hint, hint.
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