The following day, Alchoen sat down skimming through the quotations noticing that over half of them wanted one of each, maybe just to try them. With one hundred and twelve orders to do, they had a lot of work waiting for them.
"How dare you! Kill him too!" he shouted. The lizard man tried to punch him, but Anju dodged it and punched him back. One elf pulled out a small rusty dagger and tried to stab him but he wasn't a skilled fighter. Anju easily knocked the weapon out of his hand and broke his arm. He felt on the ground in pain. The main elf was frightened.
Here I go giving my own novel a 5-Star review again...;) Desolate Fate is a rebranded/polished/reuploaded version of my first novel, A Desolate Life, which has four released volumes. Most of my readers have told me that the novel gets better and better as it goes along, and the feedback from the end of volume 4 was amazing. Rewriting the novel should fix all of the minor issues some people had with the earlier chapters. This is a dark novel. It is tragic, grim, and shows the darker side not only of the cultivation world, but of life as a whole. The protagonist starts off as a naive young kid, but he gradually changes throughout the novel as he experiences more of the world and comes to realise that his life is not as mundane as he had once believed... I gave this novel the anti-hero AND villain tags for a reason - the protagonist changes. He is not outright good, he is not outright evil. At times he clings to morality, at times he becomes a villain in the eyes of everyone around him. If you want to read a dark, serious, somewhat philosophical cultivation novel, with plot-twists, and a main character who experiences both success and failure, then this is the novel for you. A have a solid plan for this novel, in terms of world building, character development, and many crucial plot points. To my old readers who are here to read again - welcome back! To my new readers - welcome! I hope you'll give this novel a chance, because I am committed to seeing it through.
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