Clear Tones

Hai Praise.. Im one of the fan for Love Pentagon.. Just a suggestion, maybe you can make the story more twisted by making Serene marry James and Ryan back with Sherri? From there, im sure the story will be more interesting and make people curious to read more and more.. ❤️

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this book is pretty good it has a couple of problems mainly dealing with how fast the story progreses the characters are Aldo a little rushed it seems other than those couple of things I would recommend reading it. I would especially recommend it if it did not go premium by chapter 20 I would love to sit down and read this for a couple hours but there are not that many chapters yet so alas

50 chapters inno problems with the writing easy to read and the mistakes there is aren't a big deal as there not often. Over all the story is fine but at same time many forced situations and from my initial thoughts on what the story would be from the description of a mc that has to pave his own way in cultivation no matter how stacked against the odds thing are against him with his background and cultivation talent have to say he's had things being pretty convient the whole time. For some reason author has made the concept of strength a cultivator should have at each stage come off pointless. Just makes everything seem completely forced when you have the mc who still at the first tier in cukvation being able to inflict wounds or now even kill someone multiple tiers above his level. Even if the excuse is they were tired I don't see it working why because even a tired body builder is still going to be stronger then a average person, a tired long distance runner is still going to be able to out run a average person. Let alone people that should be hundreds of times stronger then the mc and having abilities like spiritual sense and experienced many years of battle compared to the mc who's still new to all of this. World background honestly is lack luster I don't expect to know of higher worlds or other kingdoms by now but at least give the places the mc is at sense of existence. Descriptions on the size of the location, what's there what it looks like and the people and what there doing. This is good filler and at same time as long as done right meaning full filler because it fleshes out the world the mc is at. The Author deserves praise on the upload rate very rare see a author put out 14 chapters a week when so many struggle to just put out 1.

Definitely a well written story!One of the strongest points as well as its weakness for me was the attention to detail. I could imagine everything the author was describing perfectly, but at times it became a bit much. We have what feels like the character's entire backstory first thing in the first chapter and it felt a bit cumbersome. BUT! It was all written beautifully.My only advice would be to do more showing and less telling. Other than that I think you have a promising story on your hands :)

There was a novel like this before, but unfortunately, only 4 chapters were translated for soem reason. I think it was called Livestream: King of Death, or something like that. It was translated here on WN, so you can look for it if you want.

This story has a slow pace to it. It develops the characters so you feel a connection with them. I love how the author chooses to tell the story how he wants. There are to many authors that try to conform to the comments and change for them. This author wants his story to be told how he feels it should. This story has sent me on an emotional rolloercoster. It makes you wounder what direction the plot will take knowing that anything is game. This story should be made into a book and shown to the world. No other person can grasp the issues that others face like this author.

Dont think anything else and just click the like button. Im a ****** man i saw/read erotic scenes,harem romance i press like.. So are you?