My only question is what is the NTR situation? How does it occor. I hate NTR, absolutely hate it. I must know what it means in this story. Iβve seen stories where they have the tag NTR but its only for aide characters, not mcβs girls, just wondering what is it in this cuz if it affevts the mc... im gone.
in the disciple accepting system novels group this one js among the bottom tier(the lowest according to all that i have come across) totally unoriginal as atleast half have some twist but this is just trash
Just found this and looking forward to reading, nice to see more undertale fanfics hopefully I can find some warframe and borderlands ones that aren't dropped after read this.
Honestly, if u can read past the stupidity of the mc, it would be a decent read. The first hurdle in the reading comes unassuming. He is supposed to be a reincarnation of a 30 y/o, not a kindergartner. He seems to make the logical action then does something beyond stupid to force the plot armor card to appear. Then he repeats. The mc seems to have 2 personalities, the one that is logical and then there is the one that embodies arrogance, with nothing to back it up, and stupidity, with no reasoning behind why. The logical one is the one barrating while the other one is the one acting and doing the stupid to force the plot along. Then there are assumptions made everywhere that have no evidence, like them being dragon royalty or something. All of it comes as if the narrator is unreliable without the author meaning to. It would have been better if the author didnβt make the mc a reincarnator. It would have been a better read and would not have all of these problems.
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