Writing Quality: 4 StarsThe Author personally thinks that the writing quality is decent. However, the grammar is a bit meh...English is not the Author's first language. He had never mingled with the English-speaking community before, and he had very little time to take English lessons since language was not his major. The Author could do this well thanks to his experience reading many English translation novels.The way the Author wrote the ICEE is a bit troublesome. First, he wrote it with own language and then translated it with Google Translation. Finally, he edited it using Grammarly. So, please understand if the writing quality is not very good.Stability of Update: 2 StarsWriting novels is Author's hobby and side job. Meanwhile, he still has his job. Therefore, the stability of the update is not guaranteed and satisfactory. However, he still strives to write whenever free to satisfy his dear readers' curiosity.Story Development: 5 StarsThe pace of the story is relatively slow. However, it was steady.The development of the main character's strength is also a little slow due to his cautious nature. However, it would progress rapidly once he discovered a cultivation technique to conceal his cultivation base.Besides, the main character also still has many things that he must upgrade using his Cultivation Points besides his cultivation base. Although increasing the cultivation base is essential, improving other aspects is no less important.Character Design: 5 StarsThe main character made by the Author is humble, cautious, and steady. However, he is definitely not a soft persimmon.The Author doesn't intend to make the main character low-key. He just wants to make the main character no different from other relatively talented sect's disciples. Still, he is a protagonist, after all. No matter how ordinary he was, he still had some aspect that made him stand up among the people.Apart from the main character, there are also some interesting side characters and some cheap enemies.For more information, you can read it yourself...World Background: 5 StarsThe Author said, "It was good... I think."
One of the best stories I've read. Epically gripping writing. Great translation. Great action scenes. Very well written characters. This is easily my favourite novel I've read on this site. Can't believe it's not more highly rated.
A fun read if you have the time and with the daily upload rate its worth putting into you collection if you have extra time out of the day.Chapters a shorter than the others in the genre though.Still a good read at the end of the day.
at first I thought that maybe the chapters would be super short since it looks like the author released all of the chapters at once, but the chapter lengths are all what would be considered average compared to other novels.
The book is good no doubt about it Good jobThe problem is the mc he's not getting strong at all he's getting weaker every chapter2ndly his reasonings is so flawed it's borderline stupid like he forgets that he used to b an old soul 001793rdly the pure mana requiment hollow thing makes no sense at all his body was made by the best of the best in the world but took him 12year to absorb miniscule mana am like wtf.Without all this inconsistencies this book would b great I still recommend it.
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The dark flames crackled with lightning as they blasted into the body of Old Man Golden tearing his right wing off and burning a majority of Old Man Golden's face. Unfortunately a golden apparition appeared taking the brunt of the hit before dispersing. Old Man Golden roared in agony before glaring at Anhil who had traces of anger marked on his face. "You dared call forth the soul of your ancestors to protect yourself coward you lack all dignity of a member of the main dragon clans." Old Man Golden was unable to speak properly but mananged to squeeze out the phrase "dignity who needs it all that matters is the outcome" before running as fast as possible in his current state.
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