Chasing stars a galactic series

Biased review....But this is my first novel and from an outside perspective I think this is pretty well done.The Mc will not be op from the very beginning and I'm not planning on making a harem

story has potential will follow along the story

it should be a good story with wonderful potential Mc brings down the quality by a lot and made me feel like it needed veteran webnovel reader patience to read 50 chapters it felt like author tried to flesh put characters but ended up with more issues...like isekaied mc needed a sword to tell him how a system workedfuturistic fantasy world with magic and technology but no DNA test or blood rituals for paternity...characters too are flawed like first thought on seeing an albino kid is adultery.. on a noble family matriarch who then proceeds to weep like a maid and abuse the kid for 9 yrsthere are other things like authors attempt at mother pov to make it more reasonable..but the attempts to whitewash his mother and sister is even more forced..an s class lvl sister who silently watched the abuse for some unfathomable reason even if u can tolerate all these then mc helps by being so annoying for a supposedly 23 yr old dude with mental age of 16 by acting 7 dude has good powers which is basically equivalent exchange (sacrifice) can get op if he had more than 2 brain cells and stoppp3d whiningread at your preference coz honestly good story with development potential..but author seems to want to focus on family  drama part

It's been a while since I gave a full 5 stars. This novel is simply awesome. Fantastic game world mixed with reality because it might be one and the same. Readers need to give the storyline time to play out instead of jumping to conclusions like many have. Really lookin forward to much much more! (current chapter is 183). This novel deserves to be in the top 5.

id say this is a novel for those who enjoy character and world development. the beginning is nothing like the rest of the story.  it starts slow but it's nice cuz the character is also feeling the new world and all these new things, after all he just died and woke up as a GOD! I am looking forward to seeing Adams's powers as he works to get stronger!

Good but needs improvement, he starts inventing in later chapters but not too late. Sometimes story is choppy, please take care of care, other than that it is pretty interesting.