"Loli! Your body is so pure... You have to forcibly remove the sailor suit you' re wearing. Even if you're pushed over, you have to choose a natural one. Don't forget to give her a few lollipops!Kirby has to run away quickly. The yellow monster wants to be gay. It will not agree to have its anus poked or go all out to hug it!Destroy the wives and let the mature ladies be harmonious. Loli controls the creation of a new world. The fresh, tender, pure body shines with countless charm and holiness!"-Ch.23, Venomancer of GamingPlease like this review so it gets to the top and confuses everyone scanning the reviews to see if this novel is any good.
This book is a hidden masterpiece! Although it's not satisfactory for short-readers that don't really. I like sophisticated much but for me, I do like it. If you want to have many readers then try to reduce your point. The characters might need some development since it's lackadaisical but I can handle it. I gave it 5 stars since I do like genres like this. If I were a normal reader then maybe I'll leave a 4-star rating! Anyways go on writing and upgrading. Your grammar, tenses, and vocabulary need to be something that everyone understands, That's for your book to be more engaging!
The main problem for me is the mc. He is highly incompetent. And just thinking about the opportunity he is missing out on just because of his mindset is pathetic. And at this point others are making more use of his inn and getting stronger than him because he doesn’t understand the features of his own inn. Now it has become more of a charity than inn.
Bru Stop this Princess cringe say at keast Prince. I hate it when Mcs are called Female names its over the top cringe and for this ant the fact that you locked the chapter WAYYYYY to early a solid 1 star review.Am ch 20
Time passed and Orochimaru came to one of his secret laboratories and locked the child in a cage and decided to make him go hungry so he could brainwash him easier with food.
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