Hopefully it wont be a loooonnnnnng story since I am still enjoying it up to chapter 240. btw incorrect chapter number on 240...shown as 340 and with repeats
I really like This story just because of the Mc and the actions in this but I will say that the grammer definitely isn’t the greatest but I really don’t mind and just enjoy reading this novel and depending on who you are you may or may not see the characters as 2d but honestly I enjoy this novel beavuse I think that the premise is pretty good and I like how the story is going so a 5/5 for me personally👍
Surprisingly good story. Trully a hiden gem. It is a pity that there are no more chapters...The mc seems to be actually smart enough, and the progress of the story is rather consistent. The world itself and its people looks interesting too.So far I only found one tiny little plothole, but it's not that important. What I mean is that the core power of the mc comes from his wives and children. The more he has, the better for him. Under such a situation any person would increase such numbers as much as possible, but not the mc. Or at least not for a while. And the only explanation we get for that is that the mc is too lazy to search for more... Well, it's not very believable, but then again it's not that important in the story.Anyway, I totally recomend it.
My only complain is that even thought it has the system tag I haven't seen a single instance of the mc or another character using a system he says he awakened one in like the first couple of chapters but then he never mentioned it again until the point I'm currently at.
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