I'll just get to the point, the characters do too much unnecessary things, and sometimes they even do things that is contrary to what they stated in earlier chapters, the plot is overly used and the pacing is too all over the place, the characters make unusual choices and the main character is apparently the narrator, it gets boring in about 10 chapters in because of too much dialogue and stupid choices, albiet author did avoid adding too much cliche moments but i cant vouch for the other mistakes, the translation is also... i dont knoe sometimes bad sometimes good, like theres times where it goes from 100iq english then drops to -100 in the span of 1 paragraph
Hi! I really enjoyed reading this, you got me hooked from reading your first chapter. The characters were precisely described I am amazed~ Though I feel you were inspired by different movies compiled to one and you delivered it perfectly, Keep updating I'll be waiting for more!
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Autor here: To all experienced readers, please be gentle.I hope you will enjoy the story, regardless of my writing.For now, I've released 10 chapters, while having another few as backup, but before I work on them, I would like to know your thoughts. Unfortunately, editing all of my mistakes and polishing takes me several times longer than writing. So releases might be slow, especially because I have a full-time job other than writing. But the end of whining, have fun!
So far only the prologue is available to read. And I'd say it's a pretty good prologue. The lab and the general atmosphere of the scene is described in a easy to understand manner. I really like how the author has explained some of the sci-fi elements right away, I think this will really help the reader understand the actual story that has yet to begun. So far we only have a bit of background and we've been introduced to a few characters.The prologue leaves the reader with questions like "Who is attacking?" "What happened to the lady?" and all other little things like that, which will definitely motivate a reader to read more. This novel currently only has the prologue so I can't say much about the plot but the setting is interesting so far.
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