A good story. Well written characters, good storyline. The MC isn't ridiculously overpowered and it's a nice twist that he's actually behind everyone else. Gave only 4 stars for the writing quality as the writer doesn't seem to know the difference between since and sense...but not that big a deal.
Now that I have caught up with the story and have been following it religiously since, I got something else to say:This is the only webnovel I deem worthy of support from the entire lot(I hope to find more, but the amount of garbage makes it nigh impossible). Even compared to actuall fantasy books that take years to write(from writers like Joe Abercrombie, Brandon Sanderson, R.A. Salvatore... you get the point) this is almost on the same playing field. However, you cant compare a novella written on a daily basis without much review with the biggest fantasy writers of the 21st century. It would be unfair and stupid, and yet this work is relentlessly grasping at the feet of such giants and the quality reflects that.As I keep reading, the story only keeps getting better, the characters more interesting, and the worldbuilding more believable. Even with all the pop-culture and meta refferences, this work keeps surprising. It easily brings you from ceasless bellowing laughter, to a serious atmosphere and it even throws freshly cut onions at your face(definitely not crying, ots the onion). Can't give the writer enough praise, and while marginally subjective, my opinion allows me to rate this webnovel 11/10.**: This is my second review and I don't care if its illegal to post more than one.
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Until now this is a good read. The story is well structured, the character/story development is also not too fast and it has constant updates. Not much is explained about the world until now and sometimes it‘s hard to follow since the grammar is somehow lacking a bit. The most mistakes you will see in this book will be vocabulary ones where an article or a verb is wrongly used.All in all it has great potential and the only thing which could make the story better is a editor/proofreader to reread and correct the spelling and grammar mistakes.
Marco ran at high speed across the rocky plains, gliding and crawling up and above rocky surfaces nimbly until his bare feet were brushing against wet soil and he was whipping through the thick green foliage of the Rainforest. Grabbing onto vines and swinging towards where the clouds were now wide open and he could clearly see a strange object suspended in the sky.
Although Coca Cola denies usage of cocaine,[66]Pemberton called for fiveouncesof coca leaf per gallon of syrup (approximately 37g/L), a significant dose; in 1891, Candler claimed his formula (altered extensively from Pemberton's original) contained only a tenth of this amount. Coca-Cola once contained an estimated nine milligrams of cocaine per glass. (For comparison, a typical dose or "line" of cocaine is 50–75mg.[67]) In 1903, it was removed.[68]
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