For me, this novel was mind bogglingly difficult to finish.
I've got the suspicion that there was more than one writer involved. Tastes are different and for me some parts were really enjoyable to read, but others were absolutely not, especially those overusing the female plot devices, again and again... The novel title should include 'girls, girls and even more girls'. If that's your thing you'll probably find reading this novel enjoyable. I couldn't care less other than getting ever more annoyed by it to the extreme. I do enjoy reading about female characters, but what's happening here is more than just too much.
The actual story was very interesting and good enough to not drop reading and I wish the author(s) had concentrated on that strength. That would've really helped me making this an enjoyable read throughout, but unfortunately it wasn't to be. I feel this novel is a good example how to bring down a otherwise perfectly great story with a lot potential. Hope that helps.
author I love this book and I noticed my last comment was deleted. but will there be any more updates and since you keep dragging the book out with slow updates have you thought about ending the book soon? you lose alot of readers doing this stuff. and it's a great book but low stars due to slow
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I've got the suspicion that there was more than one writer involved. Tastes are different and for me some parts were really enjoyable to read, but others were absolutely not, especially those overusing the female plot devices, again and again... The novel title should include 'girls, girls and even more girls'. If that's your thing you'll probably find reading this novel enjoyable. I couldn't care less other than getting ever more annoyed by it to the extreme. I do enjoy reading about female characters, but what's happening here is more than just too much.
The actual story was very interesting and good enough to not drop reading and I wish the author(s) had concentrated on that strength. That would've really helped me making this an enjoyable read throughout, but unfortunately it wasn't to be. I feel this novel is a good example how to bring down a otherwise perfectly great story with a lot potential. Hope that helps.