Butterfly In The Star Castle

    Author: Doubt_CloudBoat
  • Status: Ongoing

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  1. SamuelOkun
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    "you people got laughter after she smiled I think her laugh is funny" though I managed.
  1. Dables
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    sedangkan di lain tempat, Ray tau kalau Dian sedari tadi memperhatikan nya. dia sengaja baru membalas pandangan gadis itu, agar dia tau kalau Ray adalah pemuda yang berkarisma. Ray hanya bisa tersenyum melihat tingkah Dian, tak lama kemudian dia pun melanjutkan permainan nya dengan perasaan yang puas karena telah membuat gadis itu salah tingkah. selepas pulang sekolah nanti Ray berencana untuk mengajak Dian pulang bersama. pada saat Ray berjalan menuju kelas gadis itu, tiba-tiba saja dia melihat ada seorang pemuda duduk disebelah Dian, mereka saling tertawa puas. api cemburu Ray pun muncul, dengan cepatnya memisahkan mereka berdua. tanpa rasa bersalah Ray pun menarik Dian keluar dari kelas dan berulang kali Dian berusaha melepaskan tangannya dari genggaman Ray namun dia gagal. sesampainya di taman belakang sekolah Ray pun melepaskan genggamannya dan berdiri tegak membelakangi Dian. " kamu kenapa sih, tiba-tiba narik tangan aku, sakit tau ! " dengan rasa kesal. Ray tidak menjawab pertanyaan dari Dian. Ray tetap diam, Dian pun kesal dan memutuskan untuk pergi dari tempat itu. tiba-tiba saja Ray menarik tangan Dian dan memeluk Dian dengan erat. tak berapa lama ada bisikan yang muncul di telinga nya " maaf tadi Gw udah narik Lo secara spontan, itu karna Gw cemburu liat Lo duduk dengan laki-laki lain, apa lagi kayak tadi makin buat Gw makin marah" dengan suara yang takut kehilangan. ' cemburu ?, apa dia benar-benar sayang  sama ku ' batinnya. Dian tak tau harus berbuat apa selain diam, tak berapa lama Ray melepaskan pelukannya dan memandang wajah Dian dan mencium kening gadis itu. spontan Dian mendorong badan Ray kebelakang dan detak jantung Dian pun mulai bergejolak, wajah nya jadi merah dan memalingkan wajahnya ke lain arah, Ray yang melihat tingkah lucu Dian seketika tertawa dan geram melihat raut wajah kesalnya.lalu Ray menarik tangan Dian dan memeluk nya kembali.
  1. prashant_dasari
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    Vieran is so exhausted on the heated battle. He now doesn't know how to deal with the monster in front of him. Right now, he could only think of a way to finish them but he needed time to do it. The Excalibur flashed a gray light aura that made the opposing party insecured about how he didi it. Vieran took a deep sigh and closed his eyes.
  1. JakakaJajaha
    JakakaJajaha rated it
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    "Hay, kinabahan ako dun ah." Ang nasambit ng dalaga sa nangyari kanina.
  1. GreenBlue17
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    He jumped out from behind the wall and began shooting at a few nearby assassins, instantly killing them with one shot each. He shot a few more assassins, and when he was about to shoot another, he only got a click sound from his gun, causing him to frown in annoyance.
  1. TylerHotker
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    [Your chakra points have stopped growing temporarily as a protection mechanism as your excessive amount of chakra may damage your body]
  1. Despair512bSv
    Despair512bSv rated it
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    Only shooting stars break the mold
  1. slayernomineeX6D
    slayernomineeX6D rated it
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    To me it feels weird... it's not bad but it didn't hook me in to much (ch 16), I find the story unique but that's it for me, you can give it a try you wont miss to much if you won't. But who knows, for now i will keep reading since i do believe it can be interesting.
  1. writerprimordial
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    There’s more be patient you will see more

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