It's okay so far, but there is just too much going on. Flipping back and forth from character to another, in one chapter takes too much focus. I am confused. Would read more if there were more chapters. If I have to read every characters prospective of what is going on, it's not worth the headache.
Our Heroine is too caring for her own good and trusts where she should not. Our Villains are more manipulative and calculating as the story evolves. Good story
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