Under the water noices coming from my headphones, i can hear monotonic womans voice. As long as i don't understand what she is saying, this should work.
Dear Author, i have started to read this novel yesterday and it's really good. I like how the romance is going, the millitary thing is so much better than sect, the lack of energy and cultivation by blood. I like this novel very much.
The start is interesting, one of few i cause say that stand out, good pacing, immersion is dangerous I almost finished all the uploaded chapters in one sitting
Here is my review on Thread of Fates,Characters: For me the characters are the stronh point in this story. Ava is quite good female protagonist as she eager wanted to know the mystery and try her best to adapt woth her boyfriend, Noah's life. Noah is quite fleshed out character especially with the author spend the time to build up his revelation about his past. The author also paint Noah hesistation on confessing the truth quite well.Plot: I really like the plot is about the mystery about Noah past life that related to his criminal legacy. I enjoy the firsr few chaptera build up on the mystery. I also like the author alsp expand more the consequence of Ava learning the truth. Writing: Some of the description is quite fine. However, there are couple repetitive words and missing punctation marks that are easy to be fixed.Overall, if you guys like romance, I suggest to check this novel.
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