Black Warrior System 2.0 - Fan

Really nice novel! Not too good at reviewing novels but wanted to point out that the last chapters you released (chapter 65 - 68) were epic! There was a point when I wanted to drop it but I'm glad I didn't. Good job going over every chapter again although it's a pity I'm missing new chapters for a while. Keep up doing what you do :)

How can such a trash story have so many power stones smh                                                      --------------------------- -

Muito bom essa novel, agora que tá na webnovel, espero que os capítulos sejam traduzidos mais rápidos, para ter mais caps pra ler KKKK.Sobre a historia, é muito bom ler essa 'tropa' de mal-entendido, como 'I'm Actually a Cultivation Bigshot' que também é muito bom, onde eles acham que o prota é um cara fortão, mas ele nem tem poder por si mesmo askosokoks. Recomendo

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author I just realised something you can try to improve on or maybe you have in later chapters since in currently at 260+. The sentences or rather the way the characters speak is too formal, sometimes it feels cringy and automated, no one speaks the way they do with so many words, the way to speak and the wordings don't feel natural. I'm very adept at English (even though I know it' may not be your first language) and the conversations feel like I'm reading a Shakespeare book most times. for example in chap 278 when Alex finds out about artemias plan to use him, what he says in reply to her question was honestly just too long with so many unnecessary words in between, it's even worse for artemias reply. You should try making the way they speak more natural, using common informal English lingo and having less words while still passing the message across. Just think about  contemporary English (American/British) movies and series and ask your self, if these lines were to be acted out , would they sound off to a listener/watcher or would they sound so smooth it wouldn't even look like acting, would anyone speak this way casually with so many tedious words?. I think that'll help.

Composing himself, Yamamoto gripped onto the hilt of his sword with both of his hands, making sure to keep Shirou within his line of sight.

       But her father said " even if your mom gave you permission it doesn't mean you could do anything without telling me. Don't ever repeat this. I should be the one from whom you should take permission from. Did it u get dear?"