Translator quality seems quite weak, reoccuring problem where boss-grade and leader-grade are both translated into leader grade leading to sentences such as"...as a leader-class gene, the increase was several times greater than that of a leader-class gene"Also an repeating issue where the drop color for elite-class drops and boss-class drops are both described as a green in spite of being supposed to have different giving cases such as the main character receiving 2 white drops, 1 green drop and 1 green drop and sentences talking how a green drop is much rarer than a green drop.Aside from this like a few others have already commented there are reoccuring problems with he/she him/her.The translation desperately needs an editor, proofreader or a more qualified translator to not be jarring. I'm frankly not convinced this isn't just moderately edited MTL.Presuming there was a swap in translator at I'd guess 40 chapters because whoever did the author's note translation in ch1 actually translated the grade terms properly for everything and whoever took over the translation doesn't seem to be using the same glossary since they use different translations for the different levels making it extremely hard to follow along due to inconsistency in the translation.
Freaking amazing. Tho it gets sad at times it gets better and beter as time progress. And you just can't wait to read more chapters. Definitely recommend it. Progress chapter 59.
The premise of this story is really interesting! Like I'd love to read something like this, but the execution needs some work.The English is okay, but could do with a run or two through grammarly.The update speed isn't up to the standard seen on WN. The plot development seems very forced in a few aspects and lacks detail. There's little sense of time and the MC does these gigantic projects in the space of minutes or hours - yes things are sped up but it all seems arbitrary - theres mot much logic behind time taken and projects completed. The characters introduced so far are slightly different, but dont have much personality to them beyond the basic profilesWorld building is light on details so far, and seemingly random, minimal sense of scale. Thank you author for writing this, Im only giving an honest opinion - I hope you continue writing and improving! Ive tried writing before and its very, very hard!D.W.
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