Billionaire's Amour

A nice and interesting storyline with magical aspects that are perfectly written into the novel. Easy to understandable writing with great chatacter design and story. I do not know what to criticise only the update stability that will hopefully get fixed!

IT was kinda good until chapter 60 and up the mc actually acts like 10 year old he has no goal or any type of intellect or experience of a 30 year old when he attends the dukes party its so much going on in the background i dont even know whats happening theirs like 5 different groups with different goals and agendas the mc is just getting pushed around with nothing on his mind but woman that's the only thing he does to get back at them not oh so you forced me into a dinner im gonna get your wife someday oh you punched me well im gonna take your wife we find out he has a lot of talent and magic but he hasn't trained since then he only did it for a mission once and that's it it's so much happening and his face and its like he's ignoring it i see where the plot can go and it has potential but the mc is just too stupid and immature

nice bookplease have stable updates.I feel there.. the book needs more characters to do good. hope you read it. ..........................

trash story..............................

"Lying AGAIN? Did I even lie to you? If you don't want to believe me, that's okay."

"He's a spirit King!" The King bolted upright on shock the moment we walked through the office door. I watched bemused, as Cyril Drew himself up all impressively.

"You know you are always welcome to come back whenever after all it is your house." Ash stated with a shrug of his shoulders; What is he thinking, will she finally come home. I know Michael would love that. It would put the others at ease has well. I better proceed with caution. Ash was thinking as he looked at the scorch marks that were on the wall behind Alex's desk.

Power: 0.1

*Tremble*

His glare intensified each step he took towards me. I tried moving my lips and feet but found it to be parched and stuck to the ground. No words came out of my mouth. The air seem to turn thick and heavy silence were the only thing we could hear paired with our harsh breathing.

Even so, we can still watch over them with our Magic Eye. Magic that can hear and see them from our earthly land or the sky for them.

just started reading this book looks good