Loving the novel so far... A game with a good story... A summoner MC who respects the game but still treats it like a game at the end of the day... Just hope the game is just a game... Tired of novels where you find out it was a real world at the very end...
I'm still in chapter 1, but I hope it has more details, for example his house, as he already found out that he went back in time and exactly 10 years, I know most don't care but I find it interesting
After finishing the trial read(Gotta go fast), I can say the novel is going fairly good. I can't say it's fantastic; nor can I say it's bad. So far, the novel is centered around the development of the MC's fortress, and the troubles he goes through in building it up. Within the fortress, MC is invincible. The issue is, if he leaves the fortress, he is very weak at the moment. Outside the fortress he will have no power. Only his subordinates will have power, but once they leave he has no control. Characters are alright, they have their own personalities. Some of them do overlap, but I can see development for them that couldn't be done in 60 chapters, which is a difficulty trial reads have.From what I can tell the novel will be fraught with misunderstandings about the influence the MC has outside his fortress's influence. It might get repetitive, but all in all it is an entertaining concept and I enjoyed reading the first 60 chapters. I can see the novel being successful. The writing is stable around the intended concept.I do wish, however, that the author went more in detail on the cultivation systems; at least gave us a glimpse at the skills used and what the MC's body is up to. 60 chapters in and I forgot the MC has a real body.P.S. The cliffhanger on chapter 60 makes me want to go jump off the cliff and read the MTL.
The essay switches on and off with feelings and ends with feelings. This makes the essay consistent and coherent, and at the same time, makes the theme of the essay repeat, which is highly infectious.
She thought back to the time a few months ago that they had found the celestial pavilion. It was their first time seeing a building so big and their curiosity had lead them inside. They had both been struck gob smacked as they saw the amount of magic items and talismans that were in the shop.
"You should have said so earlier!" Ichigo said before he jumped up on the bed getting ready to jump out the window. "Come on what are you waiting for!" Ichigo said to Renji to follow him as they both flash-stepped out the window. As they were running on the rooftops getting closer to Orihime's house, both Renji and Ichigo to see something in front of her house.
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