Beauty For You

Review as of chapter 630. Might include minor spoilers but I'll try to keep them to a minimum.Short Version: Stop scrolling through reviews and just go read the novel!Long Version: I'll start off by saying that this novel is simply amazing. Stories like this are what keeps me from just deleting the app due to the sheer number of unreadable nonsense it has. Now for an actual breakdown:Writing Quality - The quality is simply top-notch. No grammatical mistakes, clear and concise sentences that flow into each other beautifully, as well as smooth transitions between different points throughout the story. It's obvious that the author has improved in this regard by quite a bit, compared to his first novel (Lightning is the Only Way), which was already incredible by Webnovel standards.Story Development - The novel is slow-paced for the most part, and especially at the beginning, but I find that positive in this case, since we get a better look at the struggles Alex (later Shang) has to go through to adapt to a completely new reality where his life is constantly on the line. There are eventual time skips in the story, which are unavoidable simply due to the fact that you can't become a Sword God without hundreds (quite possibly thousands at this rate) years of training.Character Design - This is the biggest reason for this novel's success. Everyone, and I mean EVERYONE, is fleshed out in such detail that it wouldn't surprise me if the author one day revealed he has been studying the human mind for over 100 years. As for Shang himself, the many hardships he has gone through and the eventual revelation that he is, for reasons I obviously won't mention here, the enemy of the world (Opposer vibes 😉), have made him resolved to do whatever it takes to reach his goal. He will sacrifice anything and anyone for power.Updating Stability - Not much to say here. 2 chapters a day plus the fact that the author is an absolute legend. Broke both his arms at some point and somehow still pushed out chapters until he was eventually forced to take a small break.World Background - We get a basic understanding of how the world works and how the mages have complete rule over it early in the story and get more and more pieces of information in regards to the powers they wield, as well as the nature of the world itself, as the story progresses. Admittedly, there have been a few instances where the author goes into too much detail about something that isn't really relevant, but that isn't nearly enough to make the story less enjoyable, at least for me.Overall, this is truly an incredible story and I highly recommend it.Truly impressive work so far, Heat. Can't wait to see what you come up with next!

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I normally don't write a review for a book, so I hope it's not too messy. Since I'm not really a fan of the scoring system on Webnovel, you can pretty much ignore that part. First of all, I really like your story so far and hope you will continue writing.The story is well paced and I really like some of the gimmicks you built into the book. For ex. that hardcore players appear like NPCs or more recently, that he killed the snake instead of gainig a super OP pet snake with a hidden dragon bloodline... Which doesn't mean that I'm against a cool pet companion. Just do it right please. There are some grammar mistakes, but nothing really noteworthy, since they don't interrupt the reading flow. The updates are good I guess? I just binge read everything as soon as I found the novel. But from what I can see, it's stable enough.In most cases, the story is a hit or miss for me. In this case it's a hit. The genre of videogame novels or more precisley VR Games is nothing new and I guess most people who are reading your story already read one in the past. What destroys most of those stories for me are their utterly absurd amout of stats/numbers and boring plot armor that saves the MCs everytime. That's the reason why I like Dale, who spent a really long time training himself, starting in a higher leveled village. I like it even more, that he might be strong physically but doesn't have the knowledge in the fighting aspect (techniques).It's too early to really score the character design and the world background so I will work with what we already have. For the characters, we only have some information to Dale and some of the NPCs in Resko. Even then, step by step we learn more of the characters and their wishes and goals. I hope that even Dale will be more fleshed out as soon as he isn't in this constant race with the other players anymore and we will have the time to know more about his beliefs outside his wish to get stronger. Hislast dialogue with David was really interesting, since his worldview is already changing.The world of Azimuth has so much potential. We didn't even get to the Elden Throne part in the title yet and are still inside this little village somewhere in the south, but I'm already captivated by the world building. The world is huge, with the main continent still not entirely explored and many other continents still waiting. The real strength of the natives are not yet shown and I'm really interested to know, if there are other fantasy races.At the end, I really hope that there will be minimal to none romance, as the author already mentioned in the synopsis. If there is a romantic realationship planned for Dale, at least don't make it harem. Please just let him be with one woman... Harem is by far one of the worst trends of Webnovel and what destroys most of my reading experience on this site.  As some final words to the author, even if this novel might not be the most popular on the site (right now), I will continue reading and I'm pretty sure others too. Thanks for reading until here and have a nice day :)

It has a good background and the idea seems interesting, but It needs proper spelling and grammar. Other than that I think it was pretty neat.

I really loved the novel. It's super great :D...   I hope it gets more chapters.     I will definitely start recommending this to more people :D

Amazing novel and Great grammar,But slow updating.😪

Whoa!! what level of power must he (Rad) have attained to fight like this? Leo asked himself. Suddenly, he heard a voice behind him, Radueriels to be exact, saying," I was at the realm you call God Knight realm and at the supreme god stage. When Leo heard this, he was stupefied.

"Trying to escape, are we?" Their leader, only called the 'Captain' said with a smirk. "Clever, planning that out while we were planning ourselves."