Beastly Demon

please update more and more. I like it!

honestly, I don't know if giving this 3 starts is fair, but I don't enjoy this as much as I want to.mc doesn't seem that unique, considering that he somehow has instincts but no memory of past life, while someone else is his BFF and has both. this ties in with the weirdly worded title that seems to specify that only the mc is great and has this system, which he doesn't.im guessing that he gets more unique, but man, it's not really enjoyable to read now.... it's just kinda a slog right now.

I'll support you author-san.. Seiya here... Your book is amazing. Hope you can continue writing this book till the end. Still didn't read the whole book but anyway... Good book

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This is 1 of the best isekai of all times, a pity there's no more tan volume 13.But still a very good read, badass M.C. and funny.This is already a very popular anime too. Do yourselves a favour and read or watch this, u won't be disappointed.

It was good to see that Yeman was able to adapt to the system right away, but I guess it felt like he accepted the matter too easily? Also, Yeman's character is not established, like he has no prominent traits except for his occasional raging. Also, his history with Marie was quite abruptly narrated. This history has a bearing in the story, so I was hoping that it could be described a tad more confusing. I guess the first three chapters will be confusing if the reader doesn't know that the MC was transmigrated. I appreciate the detailed action scenes which compensates for the short chapters. I love Mina, by the way. She's feisty and such a badass! The pacing of the story is just right, but I think that the MC's improvements as a player was too slow in the beginning. Then suddenly, his growth became exponential. It's kind of following the usual progression of a transmigration light novel. :( He doesn't use his resources wisely and keeps on being saved by his teammates. [I'm really sorry for saying these mean things. I just want you to improve as an author, along with me too! ]There are a myriad of grammatical mistakes. (Sorry if I'm going technical) However, note that grammatical mistakes are easy to correct. We all make this mistake, so don't worry about it. Incorrect verb tenses, misuse/absence of punctuation marks are the majority of these. I'll be cheering you on! You clearly have a good world background. I hope that these criticisms will motivate you to do better. Remember that nobody is perfect, as all things should be. We should always find a way to improve! Please continue writing this art of yours!

I like everything about this story from the start. The narration is excellent in its own way. ☺ The author is doing good job I hope author could keep this pace in future😊 I'll review again after reading more chapters, every chapter is new revelation.😇 ......I am curious how Red would solve and end the cruelties of some ditch organization

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