I’m going to post my short review here, as I haven’t read enough to judge it fully. First of all, this is the work of an amateur, which is both this novels downfall and it’s defense. On the one hand, this is much worse than the authors future work (that being soul land, or dulao dao if I spelled that right), but it’s also the first one he wrote, and he has since had a couple decades of experience writing, and writing a lot too. From what I read (a bit into volume three) I rather liked it. I liked the MC even though he is simple, and I liked his relationship with his teachers. The story is very simple, which isn’t such a big deal. Sometimes simple is good. The action is a bit boring, but the magic is interesting.
All in all, decent at best, low quality at worst. Apparently, it gets worse, and I’d believe it considering it has the harem tag (which I didn’t notice until after I read so much). Not gonna address the author, who gets a lot of hate for various complicated reasons.
hi everyone, I saw complaints saying I didn't bring Nate POV early, I am sorry but it is the way I planned the storyline, I can't please everyone and pls feel for us writers because most times you don't know the state we are,some of your comments hurt us very well and that's one of the reasons I
for being your first book I'm amazed at how well the story line went and the character development never a dull moment slow comfortable flow interesting turns
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All in all, decent at best, low quality at worst. Apparently, it gets worse, and I’d believe it considering it has the harem tag (which I didn’t notice until after I read so much). Not gonna address the author, who gets a lot of hate for various complicated reasons.