Why the heck is this good novel left untranslated, whereas other trash novels are so many and updated frequently on Webnovel. Please please translate this novel properly.
While Heavenly Jewel Change offers a short period of entertainment, the shortcomings eventually cause this novel to fall short of greatness.Let's start with the unique aspect of the novel, or what appears to be at first glance, the cultivation system. Jewels, an interesting representation of the usual power scheme and one that, early on, is novel enough to garner some excitement. However, they became far less important, actually becoming irrelevant, as the novel continues. What should be the unique foundation of each character and enemy eventually turns to bland repetition or outright unimportance.Characters come next, most importantly the main character, and here's where the real disappointment comes. The MC can be outright infuriating. While the novel continually claims he is intelligent or charming it fails to be expressed in the actual writing. It feels as if he's saying the obvious thing or doing something downright ridiculous, and then being praised as some genius from the heavens. In actuality, his genius and talent throughout the entire novel come across as blind luck and easily given. There's never a point where he says something stupid or normal and isn't heralded as a genius of his time. He could say, "air, it keeps you alive" and everyone around him would be enlightened by his gigantic cock and unmatched brain. Okay, that was a little more fire than I originally intended but that's how it feels throughout HJC. It's not much different for his harem.The world building. Not fantastic. There are different powers with their own unique aspects but they never shine as all that unique. Where there should be distinctive differences there is once again bland descriptions that end up feeling vague and almost irrelevant.Now what I've written may seem harsh, and perhaps it is, but each novel needs a method of standing out. HJC has that at first, some unique aspects that make it exciting to read, but they are abandoned or turned into another bland trope eventually. Is it a decent novel? If you can stand the stomach-turning way he gets his harem, perhaps it is. To me, it's worth reading at first but not in its entirety. The Ruffian Battalion is where the MC belongs and it's where he should have stayed.
what the fk is wrong with the author one moment mc is a girl the next it a boy. can't he just stick to one and stop making all this mistakes that like the basics
Don’t mean to sound harsh but going to put this review up anyway.Straight off the bat from opening this novel page the synopsis is littered with grammar errors that don’t take much effort to fix, this makes me want to read the novel less and does not give me the impression the author puts effort into the novel.After looking through the synopsis I straight away looked through the comments to find people with similar opinions to me. I managed to find one stating that the novel contained a lot of spelling mistakes which I will also assume also meant grammatical errors. After reading this comment and seeing the reply back from the author which contained a message with the reply saying they he/she will review past chapters in a sartirical manner and also said that they did not find any spelling mistakes. This would be agreeable and I would have found no trouble with it if the synopsis was not in the state it was. After reading this comment I thought if he/she could confidently state there was no spelling mistakes in the chapters then that would mean he had read through them and double checked, which means he/she overlooked the grammar mistakes and made me make this comment out of boredom. I realise no everyone has the time to overlook their work but it just degrades it and stops new visitors from opening and reading what I’m sure is a good read all problems aside.Sorry if you don’t agree with this comment but had to put it up out of nessasity. Also thanks author for taking the time to make a novel in the first place.
An interesting story with a few mistakes but very little and that don't effect the story much. The story is already pretty unique, I find the experience can concept very interesting. There are only a couple dozen chapters at the moment but I can't wait to see more of it. To the author: I hope u don't drop it and continue writing this story. You are doing great so far and I believe it will do good but it might take a while so don't be discouraged.All I can say to finish of this post is, I wish there was more to read.
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