"Oh and the manager is going to kick us out so I am just going to leave.." he adds getting up and walking out casually. I glare at the back of his head.
Hello author I wanted to know if that Mc will become stronger in the future? And what about him being fat, I understand that this would is reverse but will he at least become lean and muscular?
2 certain paragraphs... were 💀 but the transition of situations in the story is very much intriguing.. the mystery I liked the most and I am excited to read the next chapter.🙏🏻
Writing Quality ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Stability of Updates⭐⭐⭐⭐ Story Development⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Character Design⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ World Background ⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐ Now that I just wrote a review for a book I didn't like, it is time to write one for a book I like. No / minor spoilers ahead. Wiriting Quality: The book has a nice flow, and the quality is really good. Stability of Updates: With two chapters a day, the update schedule is quite good. Although, I wouldn't mind 20 chapters a day, considering I devoured all 80 chapters in just two days! Story Development: The story is progressing well and stands out as one of the better novels in its genre. Character Design: This is where the novel truly shines. The MC is well-developed, and the side characters are given sufficient attention. The MC thinks things through before acting, which is a relief as I hate stupid MCs. World Background: Everything is explained just right, not too much not too little. I could write some more about how MC does this and that. But that would take away from you just reading it for yoursel
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