The general world building is pretty good, with a nice story to it. I would really like more of this. BUT there are a lot of errors, especially he/she her/his... and there are some weird story developments...like when Lydia, the mother of the Myra just comes outta nowhere and jumps him
I'm sorry, I really tried to enjoy reading this novel. But the quality is really bad. I feel like my neurons are committing sepuku as I write this. Please find a proof reader first of all.As for the story, nothing out of the ordinary at least up to the I read. And that is the first impression.
This is a copy of another novel with the same name. Didn’t even bother to change the cover. I will now 1 star all of your stolen novels. Imagine stealing IP. You don”t even translate them. You just steal them from other sites.
Please start translating it on official platform, it's an amazing novel, mc is cool. The plot seems nice, characters are well defined and properly addressed.
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as I was thinking all this I didn't notice someone was watching over me. I thought my mother must we aware about her daughter so I will ask her. with this idea in me, I started working and very soon the day came to an end. I reached home and saw my mother was yet to come so I went to the kitchen and started cooking for both of us. it was a Saturday night and servants were send early so that they can also enjoy their family time. I was making chicken fried rice with dumplings. after cooking I went to take a shower. I was coming downstairs and saw my mother sitting on the sofa. I ran towards her and hugged her. then I asked her " how was your day". she replied "as usual". after we had dinner together and after that, we sat on the sofa and eating apples along with watching cartoons on television.
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