As The World Spins

"Good night, Ether, I love you," Mal smiled and kissed her forehead, eliciting a small giggle of happiness from the girl.

"Seriously...? I- crossed your line-...? " I couldn't believe how foolish this Cow's words sounded.

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show, on get paid

You'll never know if you don't go

The Queen, who had a malicious smile on her scarred face, was stood before Maila and Sulon, a crown resting atop her tight red curls. She had dramatic red makeup, and a large gown that reached the floor, covered in mud and blood. It was detailed with white and gold bows and pearls, all glinting in the firelight of the burning city which was exposed.

It has a few places to develop in the story but still is a very doos story with good explanation

Great start. Enjoying the story unfolding.

If you're looking for the perfect mystery novel then this is the one! It literally takes me on a rollercoaster ride of emotions as the characters face impossible odds and discover hidden strengths within themselves.  With complex characters, vivid world building and a rich plot that keeps you guessing.  I especially love the clip hangers at the end of each chapter and the chapter titles.  I just love it!

I haven't yet grasped some other elements. But the descriptions are so vivid. Like... I was immersed right away, losing the clear sense that I am reading nothing more than a novel. I also love the masterful progression the author gave Austin in the first few chapters. It's really worth a read! Well done!

Hey guys I am the author of this novel and i have literally many ideas revolving in my mind. I hope you enjoy the novel. if you are finding these chapters kind of boring then don't worry the real game is just about to begin...