Arch, Inc. - Secret Origins

    Author: Michaelrhale1983
  • Status: Ongoing

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  1. 8destroyer
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    So much to do, so much to see
  1. BilalWaleed
    BilalWaleed rated it
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    keep writing, ienjoyed your story very much
  1. Blue_NatsuAE
    Blue_NatsuAE rated it
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    just for fp aksidh ziidsns xisisin sisisjan
  1. Slowdown
    Slowdown rated it
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    not sure would enjoy it...main issue with the story is it let's down expectations Mc is at his lowest abandoned by everyone then suddenly gets a system turns everything around in a month dude is framed for embezzling half a million...but suddenly declared innocent after he pays it?also family interactions are what killed the story for me ...dude initially ignores everyone's calls for a few days..goes home and has a convo..that's it..while it's admirable that there is no rage or angst..dude essentially becomes a doormat..like especially it's a one word apology from his sister who not only publicly verbally abused him..also supported his ex to breakup...then there is the rest of stuff like Zack or mc suddenly doing the chinese street race gig romance with Lila is another bs as it moves too fast like 3 dates in...mc be like no one likes me like Lila. wtf...read if u like slice of life.. no revenge or angst here

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