Normally novels have at least one redeeming feature that keeps you reading.This novel however? Lacks in everything. World building. Protagonist. Characterisation. Narrative. Translation quality. So what do we? Just don't read - it's not hard. Click back and never look 'back'!
if you are looking for a story with developments, this is not the choice, this book is a little tedious, it is a monologue of Mc with everything else. I want, I take it, I feel like it, I do it, I have it, I realize it. There is nothing surprising, just a lazy mc who chooses op power to make a harem.
But original showbiz is rare as most are translation and there are many romance novel.Anyway i don't blame you good luck in this work,i'm still supporting! 💪
The first chapter is a really nice pilot. The writing quality is also amazing. I think the character design is just beautiful. The updating stability should be improved, but I won't get impatient, the author would have his reasons for this. But I would recommend to upload atleast two chapters per weak if you want to become a good author. I can see the potential in your novel. And, can you please read my novel? It's titled heavens slayer. I won't force you to do a review (but I'll be glad if u did it) but I need your suggestions for the story. And as for this book, it'll really be a banger in the future. The story and world background is amazing. The start is also very well paced. Follow my advise and this book will definitely appear in others' recommendations soon!
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Well this is a motivation boosting review ! I'll give a proper after reading more chaps but I'll say author and mc both are doing real 👍🏻 for holy moly sake !! so you can definitely give it a read! trust me 😉🙏
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