Arafta

Awesome nice to read , very interesting story, English good, story plot getting better, no regret reading it, the flow of story is exiting and wanting to keep on reading

Really good, I look forward to the continuation!He falls into my library without hesitation140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140.

Writing Quality is great, there are no rough sentences, easy to understand and the way you write the fighting scenes are good.(Kiss Of Death, Oof... I remembered DitF) Stability Updates are also good, I assume you update almost everyday. Story Development is also good, the pace is good, the fighting are good... Though, I think some of the elements are already used though, but there's no harm done, it is still unique it it's own way. Character Design is good, in Ch1, there are already too many characters, there are those that are based on some Movie or Greek mythology(Thrain, son of Thor,  Oof.. Reminds me of Lord of the Rings) World Background is good, futuristic world with advance gaming technology...Seems. great.GOOD WORK AUTHOR, KEEP IT UP.*THUMBS UP*

Beta male mc. Not my cup of tea. Some issues with phasing. Felt it was bit jumpy from scene to scene. Average writing. If you as a reader like beta male mc then its worth a try.

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I don't know for sure if this book will stay with me ike some of the others do, hopefully quality and frequency doesn't drop. Good enough for now.

Sensing the weird gazes coming from the guests who were present, XuanFei opened her mouth, trying to explain.

Daisy's POV