Aobara-hime no Yarinaoshi Kakumeiki

After reading a couple hundred chapters here' s my opinion..ProsInteresting ideas for a worldHis cheat is pretty cool and the things it can do a really extensiveConsEveryone but the main char is 1-d at bestKinda slow progression for such an op cheatEveryone important char is a Male,like all soldier/general even enemies are basically all male, like seriously at chapter 200 there's 4 women who have names (not counting the 2 I mention later)and none are important even a slightly to the storyExtremely over reliance on modern weapons to kill anything,like he almost has enery weapon you can think of and he uses them constantly, Handguns,rifles,grenade/rocket launchers, he even has a freaking assault helicopter and hes using them in a fantasy setting on fantasy creatures,like it would've been cool if he could improve the personal strength of others with his cheat but he couldn't play out his modern warfare fantasy that way I guess.As for why I finally stopped reading, well the main char's enemies kidnapped and killed 2 girl he knew( he just met them), so he chose to revive them with new bodies that were naked while another dude he recruited just watched (he had all the time in the world to put clothes on them before he took them to the revive alter) ,I just hate reading stories where women who are clearly becoming important to the story, just be randomly seen naked by anyone but the MC, it's one of the main reasons I read CN stories instead of JP or US ones.

what a road to go all the way to the end, had to go to WW to finish it 2088 chapters, a long way it was and worth it. it's not the best novel u can find but  it was made with a lot of passion and feelings in it, i felt sad, angry, happy, sorrowful together as it passed, what a great story.

Well, this novel is a bit interesting but also boring. It's quite literally as the synopsis says, except the Mc doesn't start controlling ants till over halfway in the current chapters. It's at this point that it gets very boring for me as I can pretty much tell what's going to happen next.  Translation is not the best. It seems to be getting worse? It's readable but there are many tiny things like sentences structure and grammar that just don't make sense, no matter how you look at it. World Background.. I mean, it's on trials reads so I can't say much and I've only read like half too. So far, It's seems similar to the generic fantasy world with level system? Not tryn give too much spoilers, well, I mean, that was a big spoiler if you understand..yepStory development? Well, he levels up, eats crap. I've never saw him poopin tho..kinda dissapointed ngl. He learns to hunt stuff, pretty cool and all.Would I recommend this? Well, not really. It was interseting, but there wasn't much keeping me going.

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This author desperately needs a editor. The grammar here is horrendous. Bordering on illegible. Otherwise it has a good premise, story might need some fine tuning, like an introduction to the character maybe? or some developement to help you understand where he came from and where he is going BEFORE his death. So you understand him and his time before the travel earlier on in the story. Overall, i suggest getting someone to fix the writing for the author. But keep up the work, its possible to make it better, looking forward to it.

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carl though time really fast I regret that I create solomon and other as an adult if I create them as a children no no I'm not lolicon!!!