Another other world revenge story

"This is… allHISfault..." Raynare spat out blood as she collapsed and fell into unconsciousness. The large monster was now preparing a new attack coming from its mouth and as the light blinded Issei's eyes his last thoughts were…Where is Gohan…?

"What? but how?" I asked confusely.

It is important to keep the story interesting and consistent in premise. The Author has interesting premise and strong commitment to it. THe problem with System novels is the system aspect becomes just bloat and unneeded. Only to sell the power creep. Hopefully the author will keep that up.

Sorry for the inconveniences we (male) cause

Actually a nice read. Well written and good so far. Personally, I would suggest you read the novel. Looking forward to how the story progresses.

I think so far the story is great. Keep going. There are some grammar issue but it okay. I like this story very much----------------------------------------------