Not gonna say much, only a few words: It's fking awesome(well I read the manga). From what I know:-It has a system-Mc's badass-Villian's badass-Mc has a sister-Mc needs money-The Hype is goodI recommend manga because the expression of that first villain was awesome. I could literally feel chills.After that, follow the novel.But that expression was fking thrilling
What I found most disturbing about this story are the long, never-ending sentences. I think this story was written by a ten-year-old with a sixteen-year-old libido. I like the theme of the story but can't stand the writing.
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A good novel.However, there's various points needed to be mentioned.1- Early wall pay chapters, with only 31 chapters being able to decide whether you like the story or not. This isn't a problem itself If it weren't for the short chapters. The chapter are too short for what the novels need.2- This point is related with the previous one, due to short chaps, there isn't a feeling of development with every chapter, you need to start lengthen the chaps or at least rethink about how you will build each chapter, please don't fall under the premise of spamming chapters for small events that could be easily be fixed with a length of 1.800k to 2k words length.3- The early chaps really need to be extended to at least 3k words to explain your new readers where they are and let everything set go for the walled chaps, where you could put the story on.Nonetheless, the novel have an interesting premise, a good world building and background and the MC is interesting. What I liked more about this novel is the ground to improvement with the MC personality, as having a new chance to experiment things he couldn't in his previous life could lead to interesting plots.The females characters are well portrayed as the side characters personalities too.
After the Li couple had woken up and eaten their breakfast, Li Jun had called for a meeting after which Yu Yan did not get to see him again. He had told her that a ton of work had plied up while he was in San Fransico which could not be delayed anymore.
That was because... He even looked like the famous antagonist who even had a meme based off of him - the one that started with, "Is there an XXX character stronger than Uchiha M*****..."
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