Analysis

This author is known already for some pretty interesting works so finding this one is nice surprise! I hope this story goes far so thank you author for your hard work! <3

I just thought you should know that I love your writing and that you are doing a great job with the way the story is going.  you probally wont read this but if you do I just thought it would make sense if you used Egyptian mythology for any lind of animal people or beast people because the Egyptian gods have animal parts and they would be royalty in that kingdom.

forced situations, unreasonable reasons, an boring..............................................................................................................................................................................

An interesting novel! I must admit I was taken at the first chapter and hooked ever since, the writers prose is fluid and easy to read whilst describing things in colourful strokes. Bravo! can't wait for more chapters.

It feels weird reviewing my own craft, but I guess it goes to show how proud I am of my craft. I wish to thank all who have shown interest in my work. You are appreciated.

Ngl is pretty good for Enlion. I've read most of the previous novels made, and they were there. Most of the novels made previously felt like iseki anime if the protagonist's story if they were longer than 12 episodes. But this is far gone from that concept with reasonable cherector interaction. Of course, I've sat through enough harem novels to know they don't usually turn out well most, if not all of the time. But this novel was super interesting, so far up to chapter 75. I'm quite curious about how the interactions the main protagonist will change when he inevitably dies and moves on (hopefully) because most of the interactions he's had feel half harted from the main pov. Of course, I mean from a naritive standpoint. But overall, it's super good compared to his previous works. (Also, I super enjoy when powers are used creatively, so the ability Dominate's uses have been super interesting) ((I'm bad at words btw so ignore grammer/punctuation mistakes, pls)),,.... Also, this story feels way more thought out as well, and that's probably my favorite part of it instead of the usual "It happened because it happened"

   Plot armor from the get go. Contradictory sentence to sentence, paragraph to paragraph. Words become pointless when descriptors are constantly being put in juxtaposition.

so the next two weeks was slow a bit boring but did enjoy watching lots of movies killed up with Rob. after my time of punishment the days and weeks just merged together me and Rob had a awesome times just hanging out enjoying each other's company. before long the weeks turn into months and me and Rob had been dating for almost a year.