It has a great potential, so keep going and also I suggest you to update more, cause It's the beginning of the novel. Once it reaches 200ch you can update go back to normal.Totally, I like this novel and I hope you update more and faster(not that it's already slow)
Author here, I just want to thank all of you for reading my novel. English is not my native language, so I hope you will forgive me for my grammatical errors and misuse of words sometimes.Also this is my first work so the starting chapter quality is not definitely the best but I am improving myself with each chapter so you freely can give it a try, the story is getting good as I am finding writing really enjoying... also after this arc I am gonna refine the whole work but don't worry the content is not gonna change just going to adjust minor cliches and repetitive sentence...Thanks for reading.
the story is good. I felt like like the story was following the story Swallowed Star but it took a turn from there. the writing is so so level, maybe you are a beginner,but I am expecting something good from this novel. maybe it will turn in better in the future. you have my support bud, continue writing
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