I love this book. Finished reading it and it was very good. I even want more. I will be happy if the author can write the sequel like how other famous books do when the readers are asking for more. It will be more fun if there is an higher level world out there that he can go to where there are god's, demons, kings, emperor's, civilizations
Your novel has good things author. The style is fast-paced and straightforward, something really good in action scenes. It feels like a modern work, both in setting and as a literary work. Good job.However, sometimes it reads more like a journal, while others more like a short story. This inconsistency can make it sometimes a little tiresome and tedious to read. Try to stick more to one style. There are also some grammar mistakes like mixing grammatical tenses and missing plurals, but nothing that makes the story unreadable.Some few fixes and you're good to go. Keep working on it!
Thanks for picking this up.I'm enjoying this novel a lot so far. The Plot is getting interesting and the interactions between Yu Hua and Qing Ya are priceless. The Comedy is great, as I got a few laughs here and there.Definitely worth a read.
while I thinks this books is good so far but there is a big jump in the store from chapter 16 to 17 and I feel like there miss parts of the store that hold info we need
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can mc do anything else that cry 😭if some thing bad happen it was fine at start but after every 50ch mc is crying .I rather have him become a killing machine than a broken character
Bias Review, tis good book, especially if you have enjoyed aoki's previous works, its got great character development, world building and a system if thats your cup of tea
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