"Chris," the man addressed, lifting his gaze to meet his mate's and beta's eyes. In that moment, he comprehended the situation. Without hesitation, the man behind Isabelle stepped outside, closing the door softly behind him. Rising, he approached her, gently grasping her chin. "My love, do you really wish to venture out and risk being taken by those men? They could exploit you, sell you to a brothel, you know. Can't you see that I'm only trying to protect you? Why can't you stay here in peace?" Isabelle looked up at him, defiance shining in her eyes. Her audacity caught him off guard, as though even her boldness was a natural response to their connection. "What's the point of this life? At least out there, I wouldn't feel like a囚犯. I despise this place, it suffocates me. There's no companionship, no communication – not even a phone. And you, yes, you treat me like a contagion, afraid to touch me. As if I were a plague. But know this, I'm content with your behavior. But just let me live my regular life, can't I have that?" she cried, tears streaming down her face. Overwhelmed by her emotions, Chris, unable to bear her pain, removed his hands from her chin and pulled her into a comforting embrace. After a struggle, she eventually quietened, letting out sobs into his chest. "I'll allow you to leave. I'll give you my phone for now. Please, stop crying," he whispered, his voice barely holding together. He reached for his table, retrieving his phone and placing it gently in her pocket.
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WilderThingsqAG rated it
Just great.. besides some troubles with the grammar and the inevitable slow-release, considering the quality, it's perfect.. It's worth the title, the MC is really badass.. the situations are created in a way that a lot of novels lack to supply the MC.. I expect some plot twists though, as if keeps steady at this pace, it might be a little saturated.. but all in all, it's great, and it only has 30 something chapters rn.. keep the great work..0 0 Reply
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PSR rated it
I like this novel a lot. My only grief with it is that the updates aren't released at ludicrous speed. Am I at 140 yet... how about now? Just a little bit more I think0 0 Reply
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ViadhivanRanataS8i rated it
A minute of your time if you please. The reviews talking about the stupidity of the main character and plot armor in the earlier chapters is true. The reason I am not re-writing them is because i don't want to change things and then the later chapters are filled with plotholes. I am not asking for you to drag yourself through those chapters, if you can't take that stuff, then my advice to you is not to waste your time. Seeing as this is my first novel, I would like to think that my writing will get better over its course. This review is just to ward off less tolerant people, instead of them reading the novel and leaving a permanent negative review about something that I am working/have already worked on in the later chapters. I welcome criticism if it will help me improve my writing skills, but having the rating of my novel lowered because of a situation that is being solved/already been solved is just depressing. If you read to this point, thank you for your time. Hopefully, this review will not cause any misunderstandings0 0 Reply
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Lucky00 rated it
(Read to chapter 54)1. It’s not exactly the flow of writing that’s a problem it’s more that clearly there’s been a lack of care in the editing and checking of grammar, spelling and punctuation making it not hard per se but irritating to read.2. The story itself seems ok but it also seems quite rushed in some areas and the writing itself doesn’t absorb the reader. There are constant coincidences and plot armout. “You know that girl you had *** with? Turns out she has a special bloodline that means she can become super strong with you so that you can carry on having *** with her and have a superficial relationship!”3. In my opinion, the mc has an unlikeable personality. He’s rash, arrogant and makes impulsive decisions. 4. The world building is pretty lackadaisical in my opinion.By the way, I’ve focused mainly on the negatives simply because they stand out more to me. It’s not terrible but it’s also not very immersive.0 0 Reply
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Nemesis_Ryzen rated it
The writing style is amazing. English is perfect for me.This is my first time following a gaming novel, but I know it will be good because the author's other novel is also very interesting. This author writes very well action scenes and gives you a good picture of the world through his words. I highly recommend this to everyone!0 0 Reply
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dyoodle13 rated it
I'm a fan of pretty much any pet taming/raising novel that is well written. Loving this one just as much as the others I've read. Keep on keeping on, thank you for giving me another story to read.0 0 Reply
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HelCatNY9 rated it
the story and the concept is interesting the imagination of the author is wonderful the narration goes well with the characters and story but there were few grammatical, tense errors I hope the author have fixed those in the Futher chapters overall amazing story good work author0 0 Reply
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Megabyte rated it
hey author-sama, did the harem start, and if yes wt is the size0 0 Reply
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