So bad just read the first chapter and you will know. Therr are grammer isses the story itself is terrible and mc gets way too op. There is not even a story. Author repeats himself multiple times
Soul Keeper had true potential. Soul Keeper was original, and well written. An excellent addition to the genre. Soul Keeper had standard tropes delivered with a smooth writing style. This was a smooth flowing story with lots of action and very likeable characters. I would recommend Soul Keeper to any fan of the genre.The characters were so real and memorable that they could step outside the pages and be in the room with you. I cared what happened to them as if they were my own friends and family.Soul Keeper kept me spell bound, and I was compelled to keep reading. Each scene flowed smoothly from one to the next.The world-building was superb and each scene was easy to visualize based on the character's senses and mood. Action scenes were vividly presented and easy to follow.I am blown away by the author’s ability to write such engaging, real-life, entertaining, phenomenal scenes. The writing style was consistent and used precise words so that exposition didn't slow the pace. There were no typographical and grammar errors that I remember.
I know The Synopsis is messed up, Here you go.Short: Seems like the mix of 48 Hours a day and The devils cage. Mc is a martial artist, He uses his head, and doesn’t cower. Very realistic. But he has Leukemia. Basically a story about a sick Mc getting a chance to be cured by participating in something. He doesn’t know what is going on. He gets thrown in a world (1986 HongKong) to complete mission and gain points to use the cure. They are called “Yanfu Walkers”. The world seems really interesting, The “Gods/High level entities” are monsters or myths from ancient china (Vermilion bird etc.). So far it seems like there will be a lot of things happening in the real world too and not just the “Game”. Basically other than the Translator translating exact words, And a little confusion during dialogues, This novel is great.Long: World: It is believed there there is a Yanfu tree, And our world in one of the fruits. Our world AKA our timeline. Each fruit has a different timeline/World. Like how the parallel world theory works. And The people who can travel between this worlds are Yanfu Walkers, Like our MC, Who go to different worlds to do missions and earn point and level up. From the looks of it, This world will have historical Events with a touch of magicalism, Nothing Scifi yet as the tag suggests. I will not go into detail of each world. Too much 🤷🏻u200d♂️MC: MC is a martial artist. He is usually Calm, Makes use of everything doesn’t have that take pride, Doesn’t cower. And quite realistic about his situation too, Is ruthless when needed, And kind otherwise. He doesn’t have that fake righteousness. (MC kills someone in a fight, And doesn’t justify it, and knows that it’s either him or them.) So far I like his choices, He does make some mistakes, But nothing big. The best thing about him is he uses everything, Lies, Cheats, Kills, and even bows down a little. Unlike those stupid MC who act straight as hell, and the plot armour saves them because “The didn’t bend”. 🙄Side Characters: Great side characters, During the first world, The side characters have a lot of power, Not like the usual where MC solves everything even if he is against a god. They also have good back stories. And learning how they are in an actual world they might meet the MC again.It’s a good novel, You should at least read 46 chapters to get everything cleared up, That’s where MC learns about stuff. The terms might be a little weird because sometimes the translators puts direct translation. The game system structure is also a little confusing but nothing that might make you want to just drop the novel.
I have read many web novels over the years, one of them being the current #2 in the Original category and I believe that this story has the potential to rival “Reborn: Evolving from nothing” after some more character development. I think I’ll be spending all my energy and power stones on this series for a while. Keep up the good work, your doing great!
There are some mistakes, obviously, the most serious being that the boss and the other "people" are shocked and then find an absurd excuse for a "person" to knock down a tree with one blow. It needs romance, after all it is a vampire story. And I would really like it to have a development of creating a vampire kingdom/clan with the MC leading it. And obviously the MC finding a way to neutralize the weaknesses of his new race, that's the most obvious point. Anyone with 2 brain cells wouldn't want to lose control or have a lapse like an intermittent madman because of blood or something else.Final: Writing 5; Update 4; Story 4; Character 3; World 5...
Seeing this, John's jaw almost fell to the ground,these were just the common ones of the race, now that he saw this he noticed that there are only skeletons, zombies and savages, nothing like skeleton archer, or zombie tank.
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