Alpha Of Aberdeen

This is the first novel I've read, I don't have much to say, I just want to help the author in any way I can <3 Keep writing, you'll go far! I don't like Beatrice... but... Samira is the best wife, regardless of the next ones!

<p>Peter watched as his body hit the ground before he walked over and checked his pulse.</p>

"So Theo what brings you to 1.st?"

'No,' she answered, heaving a sigh, quite relieved that Don had changed the direction of his questions. Don glanced back briefly as he heard the door open, it was Stainless going out to attend to a phone call. 'We were three working with her and became two when we lost Benny,' Aisha quickly added.

"Hm... I'll give you a scenario and tell me about your idea."

Phen burst out laughing when his mom slapped his dad across the face.

"Hmmm…. Nothing comes to mind" Kaede answered. "Why don't we go somewhere you like Nagito?" The tutor was surprised by her proposal and immediately gave a small laugh.

I see Auror's trying to brake the wards only to end in failure.

Me:do you want to see again

there's a great story in here. if the author ever picks it back up I hope they will spend a bit of effort on editing.

I am still writing it. It's my first ever novel. please give it a try and leave a review for any improvement