I like this story a lot.Stylish Demon can I help you by editing this story for you? I can help you fix it so the English is top-notch. I'll do it for free.
Stunning writing. You pulled me in with the first chapter. I love how you make the story flow. It's like a smooth wave of the sea unlike the crashing waves where Marcus and Ayesha first met by the cliff. This is a lovely novel to start til finish.Though minor edits need to be done. And I haven't fully grasped yet the entirety of the setting. But, Marcus is a wonderful highly reflective young man while Ayesha appears to be a sweet charming young lady.
it's a novel take on a system in a cultivation world. Felix cares about his family and it showed through the 32 chapters I read but I could not continue. The frequent spelling and grammar issues, the enemies taken out with minimal effort because plot armor, and the system having an attitude out of nowhere make this a novel I can't see continuing for me.Author, this is just how the story appealed to me. I think with a spell check software, you would be a superstar. The idea behind the system itself is nice and refreshing.
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