Ill be quick. Everything is great. world/character/story/writing, all good to great.HOWEVER!!!The MC ends up making firearms in a otherwise perfectly normal cultivation novel. Which ruined it for me. If your ok with firearms you'll enjoy this novel. If not, you probably wont.Here is a direct quote from around chapter 240.' I looked at the incoming cultivators and pulled the minigun I had left from my side bag. While at the same time manifested the four puppet arms from my shoulders and belt.The arms around my belt had a twelve-round rocket launcher each, while the ones on my shoulder had their own miniguns.'
....................................................................................I like this story....................................................................................
Sometimes words are missing, it feels rushed and careless.The story starts good and stays that way until ca. chapter 35 or 40, not sure.Then fights will take multiple chapters and there will be only fights, no story.Bored I stopped reading.
It has a good start and is an eastern fantasy novel, with a good release rate. So my advice will be to give it a try. It is a good read. Story is about transmigration so its slaw at the start but will become good as the story progress or i hope so.
I love this story. Especially how original and genuine it seems like. I don't feel as if I'm reading one of those clichés that only have a goal of churning chapters and word count without considering the storyline. I look forward to how this story will look like in the future. I'm happy to have found this gem.
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