It kinda sound's like the authors rambling on in the first 5 or so chapters. like they don't have a clear picture or understanding of what's they're writing. Overall the concept and ideas are there but I think they could've been developed further.
After reading a few chapters of the book, I decided to put the book down. My main criticism is that the writing style feels slightly elementary. There are times when the past and present tenses are used right after each other in the same paragraph which takes away from the story’s emersion. Also, I personally didnt like how the main character seems slightly one dimensional. I havent read far, but the character doesn’t seem to have any substance. However, I would still give the story a chance, because you may like it.
Lilly goes to workout but her concentration was disturbed as she was thinking about Riya. she couldn't help herself and calls Riya again. It is almost 7 in the morning, This time Riya picks up the call.
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