It started off as a good story, but I feel like you kind of just skewed off from the original story before he went into the high class dungeon became completely crazy for a bit after that, I just feel like the story kind of was all over the place. I feel like if you rewrite it and stick to the story that you were doing before everything got out of hand it be a better story.
Shameless author here, reviewing my own work!Just a quick rundown of what to expect from Wudang’s Lost Sword Returns. I'm a new author, so your comments and reviews will help shape the story and improve my writing!This is a classic Murim story with a slight twist—if you're looking for an MC who abuses the system, this might not be for you. This tale is all about natural growth, deep connections with the world and its characters, and a hint of the game system genre for those who love it. But don’t worry, power fantasy and overpowered moments are still here, and yes, romance fans—I’ve got something for you too.Hope you enjoy the journey! Looking forward to your thoughts!
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