ADOPTED HEIR

This is my first time I stumble on this website, and I happen to read a one of a kind story. I admit I am a fan of other popular reading apps. And the stories there are not that long. So at first I was not excited to read the story due to the number of chapters in it. But as the story progresses, I had a feeling not to stop reading in the middle of it. I was overwhelmed with the characters and of course the plot of the story. I highly recommend this story for anyone who is a fan of a FL that is naive looking but has a strong personality. Good job author!

Very poor quality story and it’s unfortunate that it’s even on the platform

It's rare that I write a positive review - I can't even remember the last time I did so - but that should show you how much I want this novel to be continued.The overall setting is not really unique, but it doesn't have to be, especially when the MC has a very balanced cheat - if you can even call it one, it's just a step up from photographic memory. He's not smarter, or more talented, or able to obtain information others cannot, he's just able to remember anything. And given that magic involves remembering or recreating the nearly-unrememberable, that is a big help, but not earth-shatteringly so, I think.For character design, there's not a lot to say. One point tho, despite first impressions, if you think about it, he's not arrogant, he's just aware of his status and abilities, and acting accordingly. To those who have real abilities, or hold important positions for a good reason (not just "daddy is a government official, so bow down to me"), he treats them with dignity and respect. To cheaters, connivers, backstabbers, and those who've gone mad with perceived power, he shuts them down without hesitation. He somewhat lacks common sense, but that's to be expected from someone with absolutely none of his body's original memories.The story is rather original, with numerous twists I'd never seen before (which is also saying something, to date, I've read literally hundreds, maybe even over a thousand, other novels). Some portions are predictable, but it's hard to avoid that no matter how good an author you are. Plot armor (of the egregious variety) seems to be nonexistent thus far, with the most glaring example being, uh... a bookworm knowing the Collatz Conjecture (3n+1 problem, for those who don't remember it by that name), or maybe a memory-preservation (aka mental stability) cheat having protective effects on his mind? Easy to understand explanations for kinda improbable events can't really be called egregious plot armor, the only luck there is being in a situation where his skills can shine in the first place. Sure, instead of a mental attack they could've just fireballed him, but they wanted to leave no trace for contextually obvious reasons, so mental attacks were the best option by far.Not much else I wanna say, so go read it and let WN know they should continue its translation of this excellent novel.

Hey there! It's me, a random sugar beet that is in no way related to the author or anything. (ʘ ꒳ ʘ✿)This story is about a goddess having the fun of her life trolling our mc. Why? Not telling!Anyway, feel free to leave me any comments or questions - this is for you in the first place.(◡‿◡✿)

Let me be honest, I have a very big love-hate relationship with this novel. I love it since author is trying to make this cliche story interesting in a very unique way. I hate it because the dramas inside this story is beyond what I can handle. I came here for the harem but I stayed for the girls. MC is worth nothing in my eyes. He could die for all I care. I'm staying to see the smiles of these girls. 5 stars for the story but 1 star for shattering my heart into pieces and burn it with fire extinguisher then sprinkle my ash on a chicken breast to feed author's pet.

Very interesting novel that hooks the reader. Very good charactrr development and from what I read ot has great potential. I will definitely be back to binje read it good job jordi

superb story, mostly fascinated by Lucifero who's supposed to bring war to the world but is doing good instead. wondering if he will still have the guts to complete his mission, nice story , love it ❤️

Now comes the main dish: Lala embarrassed and speechless.

{Chat: Have a pleasant (or not so pleasant) conversation with the Goddess!}

Is this your idea to rewrite? Good luck