On a peaceful after noon at a normal school something happens something that has happened before but never on this scale. A Summoning!! In the summoning one boy is Summoned to a room a room that is colorful and vibrant with color. The room screams wealth the only thing that sticks out is the fat man with a mustache but the most terrible thing is the glint in his eye a glint of greed.
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Okay so this is my second story i'm not to good with grammar and other things the other story i will be taking a break from to get my 'spark' back as i like to call it.
Also this is considered mature because well there will be lots of gore and other brutality the only thing i will not tolerate in this story is rape or slave stuff so all you justice people no need to fear.
Please comment with your opinion for adds to the story.
the opening chapters and prologue had tension and some good descriptive imagery. just be sure to proofread the narration to get rid of minor punctuation errors (mostly in parts with dialogue) and to improve sentence structures. overall, intriguing plot