I really like this story, in terms of background storytelling and imagination, a fantasy world that is very epic, challenging and very exciting, it's a shame if you miss it!
Review @ 85 ch:It is a slow easy going novel that talkes about a dad raising his kids, also the growth speed of the kids is a little stalled, it is expected since the world building itself is slow. The daughters actions are not that lame as it is stated. It is quite a good read that can really scale into a really nice thing to read.Spoiler down.. ......The things that causes the story to have potential are the following:System, daughters physic, who is their mother, and how will these kids develop.Things that are missing:Mc background, what he did when he arrived, what are the bounties he got, what is his physic.
I look forward to the continuation of the story dear authorI look forward to the continuation of the story dear authorI look forward to the continuation of the story dear author
One day I was walking on the road and It was then, When few men came from behind and Masked me, I was taken to a industry. As I was unmasked, I saw blurred Three men, As my eyes cleared, the first one was Meetulal, Second one was kartar singh, third one was Ronak, I was shocked to see Ronak, he was vibishan, They all were laughing, and I remembered my fathers words that "We should be happy in what god has given us". Meetulal picked up his gun and shot me in my leg, I realized that I wasn't a immortal, Then Kartar singh picked up his gun and shot me in my stomach, Tears came out of my eyes, then Ronak picked up his gun and shot me in my left chest heart, and I fell down.
When hearing this the former Galactic Emperor just gave out a grumble before entering inside the seemingly abandoned building from the outside. And the moment he closed the door, the lights turned on, and the voice said, "Sigh... You've come to Cashew-Nut at the wrong time."
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