A Second Reality by Masadeer

The thoroughly teased Miyako's lower half was already soaked, I can see it's showing the petition of wanting to be comforted immediately

It was not that Li Muyang had the ability to see right through the heart. But deep down in his heart he felt that, for such a handsome and dashing man there was not a reason for him to take the initiative to come forward and a have little conversation with him, right?

"Waiter, another bottle of wine, please!"

"Oh! Its nothing! I actually forgot what i was gonna say that time! Forget it!" - Me

Hell yeah i love rating my own novels 😎 🔥 🆒

I don't have any other way of saying, but to call it poorly planned. At the beginning the story promises an interaction and a plot with the lead villainess of the story (which is also the main selling point of the novel, and the title).then it gets detailed into some nonsense side quest of him acquiring some sort of powerup (which stretches upto 21 chapters for no reason)it makes it boring and i almost lost my interest in reading it.cuz like... who wants to know about all the fillers and side plots even before the story began?initially you'd atleast want to hook your audience by showing a glimpse/teasing them what you promised.anyway, i skipped/glazed past those initial filler chapters and went straight to vol 2 by sheer will. Will see how story progresses from here on out

The story shows good promise and I'm looking forward to how the story develops. I'm leaving a Review in the hopes That the author continues this work!!! I'll edit my review In the future depending on the now story develops.